① 幫我找一篇雅思作文關於用電腦(網路)的好處與壞處

Computers are now essential in many areas of life – modern banking, retail and information exchange among others. However, this is not true for ecation. At a simple level some subjects may be better taught using computers, but to explain important concepts a human teacher is still indispensable. - Introction shows main idea
There are some subjects in which a computer can be used successfully to teach. Elementary mathematics, elementary language leaning, any area which requires a student to memorize basic facts through repetition is well suited to computer learning. The computer can be programmed to provide an endless number of simple questions, and as the student answers these questions the facts are learned and reinforced. - Why computers do well, with examples
However, in the learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer is not adequate. A computer can evaluate an answer as right or wrong, but it cannot determine why. It cannot find out why a student is making mistakes, and then re-present important concepts in a different way so the student will understand. It cannot determine at what stage in a mathematics problem the student has made an error, it can only indicate that the final answer is wrong. Tasks involving reasoning cannot be taught by computers, as there are too many variables for a computer to deal with successfully. - What computers cannot be, with an example
Thus, while computers may be useful as a tool for practicing simple skills, they are not an essential feature of modern ecation, because they cannot monitor a student』s grasp of concepts, nor evaluate a student』s reasoning. Until further developments in computers are made the human teacher will remain indispensable. -
Conclusion re-states main ideas
Remember: this sample answer is one of several satisfactory ways to answer the question. Other essays which respond to the writing task would also be acceptable.,X!` k~sw5FSource: Prepare for IELTS, by Vanessa Todd & Penny Cameron, 1996, UTS, Australia.

這是電腦是否為現代教育所必須~
你可以借鑒一下~

② 雅思寫作10.08大作文機經：圖書館會被網路取代嗎

A
面

初三就是上學路上匆匆忙忙回家途中慌慌張張。

初三就是男老師上課洋洋灑版灑女老師下課拖拖權拉拉。

初三就是早自習時迷迷糊糊晚自習時朦朦朧朧。

初三就是無數資料紛紛揚揚無邊題海浩浩盪盪。

初三就是七科老師暈暈乎乎莘莘學子渾渾噩噩。

初三就是奔入食堂跌跌撞撞跑進寢室哼哼唱唱。

初三就是考試之前咿咿呀呀考試之後嗚嗚咽咽。

初三就是老師的教誨拉拉雜雜父母的叮嚀嘮嘮叨叨。

初三就是家長會前平平安安家長會後風風雨雨。

初三就是金榜題名風風光光名落孫山凄凄惶惶。

B
面

初三就是一匹縱橫馳騁追逐落日的不羈野馬。

初三就是一朵邂逅在青春街口的絢麗彩雲。

初三就是一抹蓬蓬勃勃流瀉生機張揚希望的新綠。

初三就是一片讓三月霏雨洗得濕漉漉的花瓣。

初三就是一隻讓五月陽光凝住了翅膀的快樂青鳥。

初三就是一陣被九月秋色點亮雙眸的季風。

初三就是一束被臘月雪花擦紅的俏麗的寒梅。

初三就是一點花雨一般的五彩繽紛的通靈音符。

初三就是一首清純浪漫的抒情的散文詩章。

初三就是一篇含蓄雋永的玫瑰色的美麗童話。

③ 雅思大作文範文：互聯網是否能代替出國游

正題：

ESSAY分為三部分：
1.Introction
2.Body
3.Conclusion

一篇學術性論文當中，這三部分是必須要有的，同理在考試中才能得高分。

那麼什麼是introction呢，之前看書說是把題目用替換詞帶入照抄，後來發現這是傻瓜式寫法，對於要求寫作7分以上的同學並不適用。真正的introction是「present your viewpoint」那麼怎樣來present呢？繼續。

第一步：lead-in background information即導入背景信息。
看這個例子：
Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion..
這個論文題目里， tourism 就是一個背景信息，所以我們introction里第一句就該來介紹或者叫導入背景信息，即tourism的信息。例如： Tourism has became an indispensable part in our modern world.或者Tourism is graally considered to be a hot topic

第二步：narrow down information即從大背景信息里提出你要去論證的方面。還是上面給出的題目，你要narrow down出來的就是：「people show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures」

第三步：your viewpoint即給出你自己的立場。例如上題你就可以說：「As far as I am concerned，I side with the former」

【Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion.】
Introction：
「Tourism is graally considered to be a hot topic. People show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures. As far as I am concerned，I side with the latter.」

這里要注意，第一步和第二步都是general statement，都是題目已經給你的，只需要你用學術性的文字合理輸入就好了，但是第三步是thesis statement，這才是最重要的，是你對這篇論文的觀點，也是你接下來要引出Body的關鍵句，承前啟後。。恩。。就這么理解吧。
關於BODY部分，正反兩方面都要提及比較好，一邊倒往往寫著寫著就沒話了，尤其是在考試中一緊張反應會慢點。。這部分大家參考十天寫作這本書就好了。尤其是後面關於各個話題的好句子。段落基本就是2-3段。這里需要強調的一點就是，一定要注意句子的連貫性，就是連接詞的運用，承接，轉折，句子長短搭配，在用詞方面盡量多用學術性更強的詞彙。Important可以用significant代替等等。嘿嘿，大家都知道的吧，我就不廢話了。

再說下conclusion部分。
1. summary
2. idea

Summary就是對你body兩部分的一個總結。Idea就是你自己的觀點，就是retell your viewpoint如果還是拿上面那個題目來說的，假如你是正方面論證的，那麼可以這么寫：
「From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that the host country should welcome culture different. Though some people think that visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，I still would like to support the former.」

以上就是大作文寫作的基本框架，最後再說下寫好作文的四個基本要點吧。

Understand the way to write
Appreciate the language
Remember the language
Reflect/Use the language

④ 雅思寫作大作文高分範文：網購取代逛商場是好事嗎

Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?
雅思寫作話題指導
題目講解
利弊討論提問標志：Do you think it is positive or negative development?
作家立場：網路購物利大於弊，如何揚長避短。
首段：背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場：
二段：利好的展開：
三段：弊端的展開：
尾段：再次亮明觀點 + 總結理由
雅思寫作參考範文：
Such is nature to own what our hearts desire that is why many modern people like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people』s option of consumption in many aspects. People have been debating the pros of cons of on-line shopping without reaching any definite agreement. Personally speaking, the merits of shopping on line prevail over its possible demerits.
這就是擁有我們內心渴望的天性，這就是為什麼許多現代人喜歡把他們幾乎不賺錢的錢花在他們最喜歡的商品上。互聯網的發明在許多方面深刻地革新了現代人的消費選擇。人們一直在討論網上購物的利弊，卻沒有達成任何明確的協議。就個人而言，在網上購物的好處勝過了它可能的缺點。
Seen from the positive aspects, many benefits could be gained by selecting and buying our favorites on line. The most glaring merit is that on-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，economizes great amounts of time, but also improves the flexibility of consumption. In this sense, those who select on-line shopping have more time to embark on more worthwhile things such as focusing on working or building up physique. Another advantage coming from on-line consumption is that it adds spice to our ll routine of daily life. A case in point is that a lot of fashionable ladies take pleasure in browsing various on-line shops, comparing different prices and bargaining with the owners of on-line shops. They usually end up buying their desirable goods. Last，on-line shopping will exert a beneficial influence on one』s financial budget e to the fact that on-line shops, in most cases, do not need to rent spacious places or employing many salesgirls, therefore, the price of on-line merchandise is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable, which indicates that we can buy more desirable goods even though we are hard-pressed for money.

⑤ 雅思寫作：網路取代面對面交流是好還是壞

4月21日雅思大作文真題 | 網路取代面對面交流是好還是壞?
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People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They don't need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negative development?
」
解析&審題
連續幾周新題後，本周雅思作文回到了舊題模式，重現了2013年7月18日的作文題目。
本周考題涉及網路的應用。關於網路對我們生活、工作和學習方方面面的影響，是雅思寫作考試中的重點，「有了互聯網，我們就可以不（上班，上學，去博物館，去商店，去旅遊......）」這一類話題，頻繁出現，本公眾號已經多次做過分析，請各位烤鴨回看。
本次題目要求討論的話題是「現在人們都用網路來購物、工作、溝通，不再需要面對面交流了」，因此我們需要圍繞「網路與面對面交流」來進行討論。那麼，使用網路來取代面對面交流，這到底是好還是壞呢？無疑，這不是一個非此即彼的問題，我們可以做雙邊討論，即先討論網路交流相對於面對面交流的好處（節約時間、節約成本、提高效率），然後討論網路交流的壞處（誤會增多、感情變淡），最後提出結論，在某些情況下網路交流能給我們帶來好處，但在很多情況下，面對面交流是不可取代的。
老師筆記
01
We live in an age of electronic communication, and the Internet does help us in a lot of ways. Yet the fact thatwe have computers and smartphones readilyavailabledoes not mean that we do not need face-to-face communication any more.
我們生活在電子通信時代，互聯網的確在很多方面幫助我們。然而，我們可以隨時使用電腦和智能手機這一事實並不意味著我們不再需要面對面的交流。
解析
（1）本段提出話題背景，並給出了自己的觀點。
（2）electronic 電子的
（3）the fact that… ……這個事實（that後面引導的從句與fact是同位語關系）
（4）readily 方便地
（5）available 可以獲得的；可以使用的
02
Electronic technology has dramatically changed the ways we shop, work and communicate and has brought about a myriad ofbenefits. From emails to instant messaging to Skype to social media, the Internet has made our communication faster and easier than ever before. Besides, the cost of the Internet communication is significantly lower than the traditional means of communication like face-to-face meetings. The technology connects us to our online suppliers, colleagues in the workplace, families and friends from all over the globe for just a small fraction ofthe cost required of an offline meeting.
電子技術極大地改變了我們購物、工作和交流的方式，並帶來了無數的好處。從電子郵件到即時通信到Skype到社交媒體，網路讓我們的交流比以往任何時候都快速和容易。此外，與傳統的面對面交流方式相比，網路通信的成本要低得多。技術將我們與世界各地的在線供應商、工作同事、家人和朋友聯系在一起，其費用只是線下見面所需費用的極少一部分。
解析
（1）本段提出網路溝通方式給我們帶來的好處。首先是主題句（電子技術給我們帶來了很多益處），其次給論點1（網路讓交流變得更快捷和容易），再其次提出論點2（網路交流成本低廉）。全段共4句。
（2）dramatically 極大地
（3）a myriad of 眾多的（可用來替換a lot of, many等詞）
（4）significantly 顯著地
（5）supplier 供應商
（6）a small fraction of 一小部分
03
That being said, scientific evidence is mounting thatthe

⑥ 雅思作文題目是科技對生活的影響,但時間來不及全文只寫了互聯網，是否跑題會怎樣扣分謝謝幫助。

首先，可復能會面臨跑題。因為考官期制待看到的是：科技對生活有怎樣的影響。比如科技使生活更便捷，科技改善教育，科技又影響了孩子們的健康成長。而Internet只能是論證其中一個point的例子。但是，具體我不知道你怎麼寫的。如果能在論證Internet的那一段峰迴路轉，也許不會跑題。
如果，你字數夠了，應該還行~但是字數不夠，有5行以上空著，運氣不好的話估計得不到6哦。。。

⑦ 誰有2019年2月14日雅思大作文真題參考範文求解

2019年2月14日
雅思大作文題目
新技術改變了孩子們的玩耍方式，
這是好還是壞？
New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
解析&審題
本題中有三個關鍵詞，即new technologies,children,spend their free time，要求討論「新技術改變了孩子們玩耍的方式，這是好還是壞？」在構思本題的時候，我們首先需要說清楚的是：哪些新技術？怎麼樣改變了孩子們玩耍的方式？然後討論這種改變是好還是壞。當然，我們也要提醒自己，本題的重點是討論「這種改變是好還是壞？」
說到「新技術」，我們立馬會想到電腦，網路，智能手機。雅思考試寫作經常要求考生討論這樣的題目「有了新技術，人們是否還需要去博物館，去上學，去圖書館，去公司上班」，這是要求考生討論新技術給人們的學習和生活帶來的影響。本題其實與這些題目是異曲同工的：有了新技術，孩子們怎麼玩耍？
那麼，新技術如何改變孩子們玩耍的方式呢？我們需要提煉出2-3個「玩耍新方式」，在接下來重點討論起優劣勢的時候才能有基礎。這里其實涉及到一個比較的問題。沒有新技術的時候，孩子們一般喜歡在一起做各種游戲，或者安靜地閱讀，而網路手機的廣泛使用，則讓孩子們整天獨自打電子游戲，或者瀏覽各種社交媒體信息。於是，我們可以歸納出新技術給孩子玩耍方式造成的兩個影響：（1）從真實的集體游戲轉變為虛擬的網上游戲；（2）從閱讀書籍到緊盯手機或電腦。
這樣，我們接下來的討論就相對容易了。我們可以討論這種變化的消極影響：首先，緊盯手機和電腦會給孩子的身體帶來不良影響（數據表明，中小學生近視的比例已經達到驚人的70%），其次，過多沉浸在虛擬世界容易讓孩子們產生孤獨感，失去解決真實世界中各種問題的能力（比如人際交往能力，領導能力等）。
這樣寫，大家是否覺得思路是很清晰的？接下來，請大家閱讀唐老師的高分範文，看以上思路是如何具體反映到字里行間的。
老師筆記
01
The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children wouldengage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children』s stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.
互聯網、電腦和智能手機等新技術的廣泛應用，從根本上改變了兒童利用空閑時間的方式。在過去，大多數兒童都會從事戶外活動，如遠足，玩捉迷藏，放風箏，等等。那些喜歡讀書的人會待在家裡，讀一些印刷書籍，如經典小說，兒童故事和漫畫書。現在情況完全不同了。今天，絕大多數孩子都把業余時間花在網上，玩電子游戲，聽音樂，在各種社交媒體上閑逛。在我看來，這一新趨勢有更多不利的風險。
解析
（1）本段討論新技術如何改變了兒童利用空閑時間的方式。本段採用的是比較法：過去......，而現在......。
（2）widespread廣泛的
（3）fundamentally從根本上地
（4）engage in從事
（5）to name only a few僅舉幾個例子；諸如此類；等等
（6）the great majority of...絕大多數的......
（7）browse around四處閑看
（8）downside risks不利的風險
02
Though it does make children』s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children』s performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
雖然互聯網確實使兒童的生活更有趣，並幫助他們以更快和更方便的方式獲取信息，但互聯網也使孩子們很容易對它上癮。比如暴力槍戰游戲對孩子們有很大的吸引力，以至於他們中的一些人會幾個小時幾個小時地玩這些游戲。這樣做的成本真的很高。孩子們在學校的表現越來越差，而且健康也受到損害。最近的一項研究表明，在全球范圍內，網路游戲造成70%的中學生近視。
解析
（1）本段論述把時間花在網路游戲上的第一種壞處：學習和身體受損。論述方法包括舉例和引用研究數據。
（2）be addicted to...沉迷於......
（3）appeal to...吸引
（4）globally全球范圍內
（5）be responsible for...為......負責；導致......
03
Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children』s isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn the skills to work with others,lead a team,and create new things.All these skills are helpful for children to maintain their interpersonal relations when they grow up.But children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
更糟糕的是，花太多時間面對電腦或智能手機可能會導致孩子們與現實世界隔絕。在傳統的游戲中，孩子們可以學習各種技能：與他人合作，領導團隊，創造新事物。所有這些技能都有助於孩子長大後維持人際關系。但是如果躲在虛擬的互聯網世界後面，不與真實的人互動，孩子們永遠也不能培養這些重要的技能。
解析
（1）本段從更深的層面討論花太多時間在網路上的壞處：導致隔絕，無法培養人際交往能力。
（2）result in...導致
（3）isolation隔絕；疏離
（4）interpersonal relations人際關系
（5）virtual虛擬的
04
To conclude,new technologies have changed the way children spend their free time from outdoor activities to passive indoor Internet surfing.This may be beneficial to a certain extent,but generally it isa change for the worse.
總之，新技術已經改變了孩子們利用空閑時間的方式，從戶外活動轉變為被動的室內網路沖浪。這可能在一定程度上是有益的，但是總體上看，這個變化是更糟了。
解析
（1）本段是結論，明確提出自己的觀點。
（2）passive被動的
（3）to a certain extent在某種程度上
（4）a change for the worse一個糟糕的變化
7分範文
The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children would engage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children』s stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.
Though it does make children』s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children』s performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children』s isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn the skills to work with others,lead a team,and create new things.All these skills are helpful for children to maintain their interpersonal relations when they grow up.But children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
To conclude,new technologies have changed the way children spend their free time from outdoor activities to passive indoor Internet surfing.This may be beneficial to a certain extent,but generally it is a change for the worse.
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1.The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.
互聯網、電腦和智能手機等新技術的廣泛應用，從根本上改變了兒童利用空閑時間的方式。
2.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.
今天，絕大多數孩子都把業余時間花在網上，玩電子游戲，聽音樂，在各種社交媒體上閑逛。
3.Though it does make children』s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.
雖然互聯網確實使兒童的生活更有趣，並幫助他們以更快和更方便的方式獲取信息，但互聯網也使孩子們很容易對它上癮。
4.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
最近的一項研究表明，在全球范圍內，網路游戲造成70%的中學生近視。
5.Children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
如果躲在虛擬的互聯網世界後面，不與真實的人互動，孩子們永遠也不能培養這些重要的技能。

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看個人學習能力，網路教育便宜，課時靈活，但缺乏學生於老師的單獨回饋，就個人而言不喜歡網路作文授課

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網路發展對商業發展的影響是很大的。那麼有啥具體影響呢？
特別是支付回方式的全新變革。答
網上支付是電子商務的重要組成部分，是傳統支付系統的發展和創新。傳統支付變革的目的在於減少銀行成本、加快處理速度、方便客戶、減少欺詐等，而網上支付創新改變了支付處理的方式，使得消費者可以在任何地方、任何時間經互聯網獲得銀行的支付服務，而無需再到銀行傳統的營業櫃台。
不兼容的網上支付機制無疑會阻礙電子商務的健康發展，因此，支付方式的革新必需依賴中央銀行的支持。另一方面，網上支付的安全性必然會影響到傳統的支付系統。