① 帮我找一篇雅思作文关于用电脑(网络)的好处与坏处

Computers are now essential in many areas of life – modern banking, retail and information exchange among others. However, this is not true for ecation. At a simple level some subjects may be better taught using computers, but to explain important concepts a human teacher is still indispensable. - Introction shows main idea
There are some subjects in which a computer can be used successfully to teach. Elementary mathematics, elementary language leaning, any area which requires a student to memorize basic facts through repetition is well suited to computer learning. The computer can be programmed to provide an endless number of simple questions, and as the student answers these questions the facts are learned and reinforced. - Why computers do well, with examples
However, in the learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer is not adequate. A computer can evaluate an answer as right or wrong, but it cannot determine why. It cannot find out why a student is making mistakes, and then re-present important concepts in a different way so the student will understand. It cannot determine at what stage in a mathematics problem the student has made an error, it can only indicate that the final answer is wrong. Tasks involving reasoning cannot be taught by computers, as there are too many variables for a computer to deal with successfully. - What computers cannot be, with an example
Thus, while computers may be useful as a tool for practicing simple skills, they are not an essential feature of modern ecation, because they cannot monitor a student’s grasp of concepts, nor evaluate a student’s reasoning. Until further developments in computers are made the human teacher will remain indispensable. -
Conclusion re-states main ideas
Remember: this sample answer is one of several satisfactory ways to answer the question. Other essays which respond to the writing task would also be acceptable.,X!` k~sw5FSource: Prepare for IELTS, by Vanessa Todd & Penny Cameron, 1996, UTS, Australia.

这是电脑是否为现代教育所必须~
你可以借鉴一下~

② 雅思写作10.08大作文机经：图书馆会被网络取代吗

A
面

初三就是上学路上匆匆忙忙回家途中慌慌张张。

初三就是男老师上课洋洋洒版洒女老师下课拖拖权拉拉。

初三就是早自习时迷迷糊糊晚自习时朦朦胧胧。

初三就是无数资料纷纷扬扬无边题海浩浩荡荡。

初三就是七科老师晕晕乎乎莘莘学子浑浑噩噩。

初三就是奔入食堂跌跌撞撞跑进寝室哼哼唱唱。

初三就是考试之前咿咿呀呀考试之后呜呜咽咽。

初三就是老师的教诲拉拉杂杂父母的叮咛唠唠叨叨。

初三就是家长会前平平安安家长会后风风雨雨。

初三就是金榜题名风风光光名落孙山凄凄惶惶。

B
面

初三就是一匹纵横驰骋追逐落日的不羁野马。

初三就是一朵邂逅在青春街口的绚丽彩云。

初三就是一抹蓬蓬勃勃流泻生机张扬希望的新绿。

初三就是一片让三月霏雨洗得湿漉漉的花瓣。

初三就是一只让五月阳光凝住了翅膀的快乐青鸟。

初三就是一阵被九月秋色点亮双眸的季风。

初三就是一束被腊月雪花擦红的俏丽的寒梅。

初三就是一点花雨一般的五彩缤纷的通灵音符。

初三就是一首清纯浪漫的抒情的散文诗章。

初三就是一篇含蓄隽永的玫瑰色的美丽童话。

③ 雅思大作文范文：互联网是否能代替出国游

正题：

ESSAY分为三部分：
1.Introction
2.Body
3.Conclusion

一篇学术性论文当中，这三部分是必须要有的，同理在考试中才能得高分。

那么什么是introction呢，之前看书说是把题目用替换词带入照抄，后来发现这是傻瓜式写法，对于要求写作7分以上的同学并不适用。真正的introction是“present your viewpoint”那么怎样来present呢？继续。

第一步：lead-in background information即导入背景信息。
看这个例子：
Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion..
这个论文题目里， tourism 就是一个背景信息，所以我们introction里第一句就该来介绍或者叫导入背景信息，即tourism的信息。例如： Tourism has became an indispensable part in our modern world.或者Tourism is graally considered to be a hot topic

第二步：narrow down information即从大背景信息里提出你要去论证的方面。还是上面给出的题目，你要narrow down出来的就是：“people show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures”

第三步：your viewpoint即给出你自己的立场。例如上题你就可以说：“As far as I am concerned，I side with the former”

【Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion.】
Introction：
“Tourism is graally considered to be a hot topic. People show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should welcome various cultures. As far as I am concerned，I side with the latter.”

这里要注意，第一步和第二步都是general statement，都是题目已经给你的，只需要你用学术性的文字合理输入就好了，但是第三步是thesis statement，这才是最重要的，是你对这篇论文的观点，也是你接下来要引出Body的关键句，承前启后。。恩。。就这么理解吧。
关于BODY部分，正反两方面都要提及比较好，一边倒往往写着写着就没话了，尤其是在考试中一紧张反应会慢点。。这部分大家参考十天写作这本书就好了。尤其是后面关于各个话题的好句子。段落基本就是2-3段。这里需要强调的一点就是，一定要注意句子的连贯性，就是连接词的运用，承接，转折，句子长短搭配，在用词方面尽量多用学术性更强的词汇。Important可以用significant代替等等。嘿嘿，大家都知道的吧，我就不废话了。

再说下conclusion部分。
1. summary
2. idea

Summary就是对你body两部分的一个总结。Idea就是你自己的观点，就是retell your viewpoint如果还是拿上面那个题目来说的，假如你是正方面论证的，那么可以这么写：
“From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that the host country should welcome culture different. Though some people think that visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，I still would like to support the former.”

以上就是大作文写作的基本框架，最后再说下写好作文的四个基本要点吧。

Understand the way to write
Appreciate the language
Remember the language
Reflect/Use the language

④ 雅思写作大作文高分范文：网购取代逛商场是好事吗

Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is positive or negative development?
雅思写作话题指导
题目讲解
利弊讨论提问标志：Do you think it is positive or negative development?
作家立场：网络购物利大于弊，如何扬长避短。
首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场：
二段：利好的展开：
三段：弊端的展开：
尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由
雅思写作参考范文：
Such is nature to own what our hearts desire that is why many modern people like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods. The contrivance of the Internet has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption in many aspects. People have been debating the pros of cons of on-line shopping without reaching any definite agreement. Personally speaking, the merits of shopping on line prevail over its possible demerits.
这就是拥有我们内心渴望的天性，这就是为什么许多现代人喜欢把他们几乎不赚钱的钱花在他们最喜欢的商品上。互联网的发明在许多方面深刻地革新了现代人的消费选择。人们一直在讨论网上购物的利弊，却没有达成任何明确的协议。就个人而言，在网上购物的好处胜过了它可能的缺点。
Seen from the positive aspects, many benefits could be gained by selecting and buying our favorites on line. The most glaring merit is that on-line shopping not only surmounts the geographical barrier，economizes great amounts of time, but also improves the flexibility of consumption. In this sense, those who select on-line shopping have more time to embark on more worthwhile things such as focusing on working or building up physique. Another advantage coming from on-line consumption is that it adds spice to our ll routine of daily life. A case in point is that a lot of fashionable ladies take pleasure in browsing various on-line shops, comparing different prices and bargaining with the owners of on-line shops. They usually end up buying their desirable goods. Last，on-line shopping will exert a beneficial influence on one’s financial budget e to the fact that on-line shops, in most cases, do not need to rent spacious places or employing many salesgirls, therefore, the price of on-line merchandise is, comparatively speaking, economical and reasonable, which indicates that we can buy more desirable goods even though we are hard-pressed for money.

⑤ 雅思写作：网络取代面对面交流是好还是坏

4月21日雅思大作文真题 | 网络取代面对面交流是好还是坏?
“
People today can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They don't need to do these face to face. Is it a positive or negative development?
”
解析&审题
连续几周新题后，本周雅思作文回到了旧题模式，重现了2013年7月18日的作文题目。
本周考题涉及网络的应用。关于网络对我们生活、工作和学习方方面面的影响，是雅思写作考试中的重点，“有了互联网，我们就可以不（上班，上学，去博物馆，去商店，去旅游......）”这一类话题，频繁出现，本公众号已经多次做过分析，请各位烤鸭回看。
本次题目要求讨论的话题是“现在人们都用网络来购物、工作、沟通，不再需要面对面交流了”，因此我们需要围绕“网络与面对面交流”来进行讨论。那么，使用网络来取代面对面交流，这到底是好还是坏呢？无疑，这不是一个非此即彼的问题，我们可以做双边讨论，即先讨论网络交流相对于面对面交流的好处（节约时间、节约成本、提高效率），然后讨论网络交流的坏处（误会增多、感情变淡），最后提出结论，在某些情况下网络交流能给我们带来好处，但在很多情况下，面对面交流是不可取代的。
老师笔记
01
We live in an age of electronic communication, and the Internet does help us in a lot of ways. Yet the fact thatwe have computers and smartphones readilyavailabledoes not mean that we do not need face-to-face communication any more.
我们生活在电子通信时代，互联网的确在很多方面帮助我们。然而，我们可以随时使用电脑和智能手机这一事实并不意味着我们不再需要面对面的交流。
解析
（1）本段提出话题背景，并给出了自己的观点。
（2）electronic 电子的
（3）the fact that… ……这个事实（that后面引导的从句与fact是同位语关系）
（4）readily 方便地
（5）available 可以获得的；可以使用的
02
Electronic technology has dramatically changed the ways we shop, work and communicate and has brought about a myriad ofbenefits. From emails to instant messaging to Skype to social media, the Internet has made our communication faster and easier than ever before. Besides, the cost of the Internet communication is significantly lower than the traditional means of communication like face-to-face meetings. The technology connects us to our online suppliers, colleagues in the workplace, families and friends from all over the globe for just a small fraction ofthe cost required of an offline meeting.
电子技术极大地改变了我们购物、工作和交流的方式，并带来了无数的好处。从电子邮件到即时通信到Skype到社交媒体，网络让我们的交流比以往任何时候都快速和容易。此外，与传统的面对面交流方式相比，网络通信的成本要低得多。技术将我们与世界各地的在线供应商、工作同事、家人和朋友联系在一起，其费用只是线下见面所需费用的极少一部分。
解析
（1）本段提出网络沟通方式给我们带来的好处。首先是主题句（电子技术给我们带来了很多益处），其次给论点1（网络让交流变得更快捷和容易），再其次提出论点2（网络交流成本低廉）。全段共4句。
（2）dramatically 极大地
（3）a myriad of 众多的（可用来替换a lot of, many等词）
（4）significantly 显著地
（5）supplier 供应商
（6）a small fraction of 一小部分
03
That being said, scientific evidence is mounting thatthe

⑥ 雅思作文题目是科技对生活的影响,但时间来不及全文只写了互联网，是否跑题会怎样扣分谢谢帮助。

首先，可复能会面临跑题。因为考官期制待看到的是：科技对生活有怎样的影响。比如科技使生活更便捷，科技改善教育，科技又影响了孩子们的健康成长。而Internet只能是论证其中一个point的例子。但是，具体我不知道你怎么写的。如果能在论证Internet的那一段峰回路转，也许不会跑题。
如果，你字数够了，应该还行~但是字数不够，有5行以上空着，运气不好的话估计得不到6哦。。。

⑦ 谁有2019年2月14日雅思大作文真题参考范文求解

2019年2月14日
雅思大作文题目
新技术改变了孩子们的玩耍方式，
这是好还是坏？
New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
解析&审题
本题中有三个关键词，即new technologies,children,spend their free time，要求讨论“新技术改变了孩子们玩耍的方式，这是好还是坏？”在构思本题的时候，我们首先需要说清楚的是：哪些新技术？怎么样改变了孩子们玩耍的方式？然后讨论这种改变是好还是坏。当然，我们也要提醒自己，本题的重点是讨论“这种改变是好还是坏？”
说到“新技术”，我们立马会想到电脑，网络，智能手机。雅思考试写作经常要求考生讨论这样的题目“有了新技术，人们是否还需要去博物馆，去上学，去图书馆，去公司上班”，这是要求考生讨论新技术给人们的学习和生活带来的影响。本题其实与这些题目是异曲同工的：有了新技术，孩子们怎么玩耍？
那么，新技术如何改变孩子们玩耍的方式呢？我们需要提炼出2-3个“玩耍新方式”，在接下来重点讨论起优劣势的时候才能有基础。这里其实涉及到一个比较的问题。没有新技术的时候，孩子们一般喜欢在一起做各种游戏，或者安静地阅读，而网络手机的广泛使用，则让孩子们整天独自打电子游戏，或者浏览各种社交媒体信息。于是，我们可以归纳出新技术给孩子玩耍方式造成的两个影响：（1）从真实的集体游戏转变为虚拟的网上游戏；（2）从阅读书籍到紧盯手机或电脑。
这样，我们接下来的讨论就相对容易了。我们可以讨论这种变化的消极影响：首先，紧盯手机和电脑会给孩子的身体带来不良影响（数据表明，中小学生近视的比例已经达到惊人的70%），其次，过多沉浸在虚拟世界容易让孩子们产生孤独感，失去解决真实世界中各种问题的能力（比如人际交往能力，领导能力等）。
这样写，大家是否觉得思路是很清晰的？接下来，请大家阅读唐老师的高分范文，看以上思路是如何具体反映到字里行间的。
老师笔记
01
The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children wouldengage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children’s stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.
互联网、电脑和智能手机等新技术的广泛应用，从根本上改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。在过去，大多数儿童都会从事户外活动，如远足，玩捉迷藏，放风筝，等等。那些喜欢读书的人会待在家里，读一些印刷书籍，如经典小说，儿童故事和漫画书。现在情况完全不同了。今天，绝大多数孩子都把业余时间花在网上，玩电子游戏，听音乐，在各种社交媒体上闲逛。在我看来，这一新趋势有更多不利的风险。
解析
（1）本段讨论新技术如何改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。本段采用的是比较法：过去......，而现在......。
（2）widespread广泛的
（3）fundamentally从根本上地
（4）engage in从事
（5）to name only a few仅举几个例子；诸如此类；等等
（6）the great majority of...绝大多数的......
（7）browse around四处闲看
（8）downside risks不利的风险
02
Though it does make children’s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children’s performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
虽然互联网确实使儿童的生活更有趣，并帮助他们以更快和更方便的方式获取信息，但互联网也使孩子们很容易对它上瘾。比如暴力枪战游戏对孩子们有很大的吸引力，以至于他们中的一些人会几个小时几个小时地玩这些游戏。这样做的成本真的很高。孩子们在学校的表现越来越差，而且健康也受到损害。最近的一项研究表明，在全球范围内，网络游戏造成70%的中学生近视。
解析
（1）本段论述把时间花在网络游戏上的第一种坏处：学习和身体受损。论述方法包括举例和引用研究数据。
（2）be addicted to...沉迷于......
（3）appeal to...吸引
（4）globally全球范围内
（5）be responsible for...为......负责；导致......
03
Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children’s isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn the skills to work with others,lead a team,and create new things.All these skills are helpful for children to maintain their interpersonal relations when they grow up.But children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
更糟糕的是，花太多时间面对电脑或智能手机可能会导致孩子们与现实世界隔绝。在传统的游戏中，孩子们可以学习各种技能：与他人合作，领导团队，创造新事物。所有这些技能都有助于孩子长大后维持人际关系。但是如果躲在虚拟的互联网世界后面，不与真实的人互动，孩子们永远也不能培养这些重要的技能。
解析
（1）本段从更深的层面讨论花太多时间在网络上的坏处：导致隔绝，无法培养人际交往能力。
（2）result in...导致
（3）isolation隔绝；疏离
（4）interpersonal relations人际关系
（5）virtual虚拟的
04
To conclude,new technologies have changed the way children spend their free time from outdoor activities to passive indoor Internet surfing.This may be beneficial to a certain extent,but generally it isa change for the worse.
总之，新技术已经改变了孩子们利用空闲时间的方式，从户外活动转变为被动的室内网络冲浪。这可能在一定程度上是有益的，但是总体上看，这个变化是更糟了。
解析
（1）本段是结论，明确提出自己的观点。
（2）passive被动的
（3）to a certain extent在某种程度上
（4）a change for the worse一个糟糕的变化
7分范文
The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.In the past,most children would engage in outdoor activities such as hiking,playing hide-and-seek,flying kites,to name only a few.Those who enjoyed reading for pleasure would stay indoors and read print books such as classical novels,children’s stories,and comic books.The situation is quite different now.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.In my view,this new development has more downside risks.
Though it does make children’s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.The violent gun-fighting games,for example,appeal to children so much that some of them will spend hours and hours playing them.The cost is really high.The children’s performance at school becomes worse and worse,and their health also suffers.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
Worse still,too much time spent facing the computer or smart phone may result in children’s isolation from the actual world.In the traditional games,children could learn the skills to work with others,lead a team,and create new things.All these skills are helpful for children to maintain their interpersonal relations when they grow up.But children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
To conclude,new technologies have changed the way children spend their free time from outdoor activities to passive indoor Internet surfing.This may be beneficial to a certain extent,but generally it is a change for the worse.
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建议背诵的句子
1.The widespread use of new technologies such as the Internet,computers,and smart phones has fundamentally changed the way children spend their free time.
互联网、电脑和智能手机等新技术的广泛应用，从根本上改变了儿童利用空闲时间的方式。
2.The great majority of children today spend their spare time online,playing video games,listening to music,and browsing around in the social media of all kinds.
今天，绝大多数孩子都把业余时间花在网上，玩电子游戏，听音乐，在各种社交媒体上闲逛。
3.Though it does make children’s life more interesting,and help them obtain information in a faster and more convenient way,the Internet also makes children easily addicted to it.
虽然互联网确实使儿童的生活更有趣，并帮助他们以更快和更方便的方式获取信息，但互联网也使孩子们很容易对它上瘾。
4.A recent study indicates that globally,the Internet games are responsible for 70%middle school students who are shortsighted.
最近的一项研究表明，在全球范围内，网络游戏造成70%的中学生近视。
5.Children can never develop these important skills by hiding behind the virtual Internet world without interactions with real people.
如果躲在虚拟的互联网世界后面，不与真实的人互动，孩子们永远也不能培养这些重要的技能。

⑧ 雅思大作文网络教育可以取代在校教育吗

看个人学习能力，网络教育便宜，课时灵活，但缺乏学生于老师的单独回馈，就个人而言不喜欢网络作文授课

⑨ 网络发展对商业发展的影响。雅思作文

网络发展对商业发展的影响是很大的。那么有啥具体影响呢？
特别是支付回方式的全新变革。答
网上支付是电子商务的重要组成部分，是传统支付系统的发展和创新。传统支付变革的目的在于减少银行成本、加快处理速度、方便客户、减少欺诈等，而网上支付创新改变了支付处理的方式，使得消费者可以在任何地方、任何时间经互联网获得银行的支付服务，而无需再到银行传统的营业柜台。
不兼容的网上支付机制无疑会阻碍电子商务的健康发展，因此，支付方式的革新必需依赖中央银行的支持。另一方面，网上支付的安全性必然会影响到传统的支付系统。